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a Few Moments More

For a few moments more
I wait by the door
For a few moments more
I remember the score

For a few moments more
I watch you walk by
For a few moments more
I look up to the sky

For a few moments more
I wish you were here
For a few moments more
I shed a tear

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  • JinSays gold member
    February 21, 2008
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