Tainted
lifeless wings
make stone butterflies.
A contest entry
- Another Hay[na]ku (my 50th contest on AP) by cherche -d -ame.
1050 points, ended March 24, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Sad ...
Ah, this is so sad but so true. Nice work. Tissues please ...
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thank you for entering into this contest. I am assuming you are using the butterfly wings metaphorically for a human that has been hurt and or tainted and becomes numb (like stone) Best wishes in the contest,
reenie


