Old
never forgets
being in love ...
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Author notes
A traditional Hay[na]ku is:
A tercet [3 lines]
A total of 6 words [1 in the first line, 2 in the second line, and 3 in the third line]
No restriction on syllable count.
A contest entry
- Another Hay[na]ku (my 50th contest on AP) by cherche -d -ame.
1050 points, ended March 24, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think about this poem!!
Comments
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Mmmmmmmmmm ...
You've said it perfectly - can't fault this one.
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Sweetly hopeful as we all grow old....Good Luck!
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thanks so much for entering this contest. I guess it is a blessing never to forget love , regardless of age and always treasure our memories as well
. Best wishes in the contest,
xoxoxo
reenie
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Bravo!
I love the sentiment in this little peice of wisdom my dear friend. Old still falls in love. Old loves to be loved. Old is in constant search for love. We could on and on couldn't we? Great Write! ~Peace~Gary
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I do hope what you have written is true..lol. Good luck in the contest.
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Good
Very tight little piece, Sis! Nicely done!
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This is very good, Joy. You've made a perfect poetic statement in just six words--I'm impressed.
Bill
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