Come to me little one
with the bruised heart
and broken soul.
Let me comfort you
as a mother would
as a mother should.
The world around
can be so dark
can be so cruel.
Come to the nest
where caring is
where love lives.
Let my heart overflow
and give you strength
to heal
and grow
and to carry on.
Please tell me what you think
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I knew you were an Earth Mother!
Thank yo so mouch. I must add you as a favoriet, I have long needed a place of peace and love to go and replenish my strength. One grows tired on the long cold road. The Good Lord saw fit to give me a dark path with a lot of dark folks on that path. It has not been easy, even my muse is Dark. But he did not give me a dark heart, and he always finds a way to send me someone like youto keep my spirit from going dark. Again thank you so much.
Much much Love
Nedina
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After reading your comments on my other poem, I thought this one would touch you. Thank you, deeply, for the wonderful comment. hugggggggggssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!
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AHHH, Sanctuary.Mama's goin to make everything alright. Tell mama.
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Warming!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was a warming piece to read. It really coveys the deep and intense love and caring a mother has for her young!! It shows th unconditional love and nurturing as well. Thanks for sharing this piece!!~~Toni~~ -
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I am so glad that you enjoyed this poem. thank you. huggssss!!!!!
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Awesome!
You show the caring of an mother's heart throughout this poem. And I agree that even adults need that caring too sometimes. I thank you so much for sharing this realistic tidbit with me...
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I think we all need this sometimes, no matter how old we are. thank you for the comment, huggsss!!!!!!!!
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Wow, this is very mothering, calm and serine.
We all [even adults] need that kind of mothering sometimes, to clear our minds and get us on track.
You did fantastic with the images you portray.
Well done Paulette. You should be proud of this. I am.
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thank you very much for the wonderful comment. I am really glad you enjoyed this. It speaks of the comfort we all need from time to time, whether from a parent, a friend or Jesus. thanks again, huggsssss!!!!!
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excellent
Wow, a very good poem.I love this piece u have shared with us. Keep this up dear. U write from the heart. I love your work. Good day
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thank you very much for the wonderful comment. huggsss!!!!
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Excellent and timely
If the world had more comforting and less bruising it would sure be a much better place; but things are what they are and we must do what we must do as you so eloquently speak of. Very good work. Alberto
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thank you for the wonderful comment, I appreciate it, huggsss!!!!!!
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Excellent
Now this was my fav of tonight! This was really a wonderful piece, you are evolving so much...right before my eyes as a poet Missy. I love when this happens, when I get to see it! Well, you keep up the wonderful work. This was a wonderful display of your talent, excellent flow, wonderful message and left a warm feeling at the conclusion! Thanks for sharing your talent and of course, my pleasure to read
~Tia
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thank you so much, my friend, for the wonderful comment, huggsss!!!!!!
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Just want a hug
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How about a kiss
I promise I wont ask for more
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you did an amazing job such emotion in this write . you penned it very well such love flowed through at your words keep it flowing bear poeit
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thank you so much for the wonderful comment, I really appreciate it. hugggssss!!!!!
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Touching, serene and every word immersed with love.
Love this.
LL
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thank you for the terrific comment, huggsss!!!!
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Having lost my mother when I was only 2 1/2 years old this poem really touched me in a way I can't even describe to you. Like seriously it's AWESOME! Good job.
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I am so sorry for the loss of your mother. I am glad this poem touched you in some way. hugggssss!!!!!!!
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Only a mother could write with such tenderness and understanding. The poem flows like bright silk and possesses a sound like a lullabye. This is a loving poem, thank you.
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I am really glad that you enjoyed this poem, hugggsss!!!!
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If only all people would care this way, so much evil in the world would be vanquished. Your heart flows forth and gives comfort to the anguished one. Very well written.
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thank you for that comment, I agree. hugggsss!!!!
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Great flow and very touching too.
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thank you for the comment, hugggsss!!!!!!!!
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Enjoyable
because of its tenderness, compassion and resilient theme. Ron.
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thank you for reading this and commenting. hugggsss!!!
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Excellent
Very well penned for the emotion and comfort of a child Or whom ever to gain security through caring. Wonderfully written for maximum effect. Don
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thank you very much for the wonderful comment, hugggsss!!!!
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I appreciate this write not only as a mom, but as a grandmother and a person that knows about Jesus and how he cared for people while on earth. If we as parents could only follow that example; especially when we try to discipline, because after all that word means "to teach"
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This can be thought of as being said by a parent, a mother, or Jesus, and I am glad that you like this. hugggsss!!!!
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This is very touching and very beautiful. There is obvious love and care woven into each line. I believe it can apply to many people: mother/child, sister/brother, father/son, husband/wife, friend/friend and so on. That "nest" is where love lives and in that coming home, they can be assured of your love. Beautiful sentiment. Best, Elizabeth
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thank you for understanding my meaning with this poem, hugggsss!!!!!!
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Very Good
Like the form
Love the words
You have a great heart
Sweet
Rick
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awww thank you very much for the wonderful comment, huggssss!!!!!
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This has such a 'good feel' to it...
gentle, soft...I felt calm and quiet
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I am so glad that this poem touched you. I appreciate your sweet comments. hugggssss!!!!
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good
every mother should be so concerned with their child
and hope for the best for their child good read
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thank you for that comment. I was thinking about all the people that are hurting, and that need comforting. This could be seen as a mother or a mother figure, or Jesus. Thank you for your wonderful comment. huggggssss!!!!!
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awww
It's nice to see poems that are sweet and caring. I like that you had a positive message to this piece. Very nice. The way you formed it was unusual but nice and the background is soothing and fits nicely with the poem itself.
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thank you for the comment, I am glad that you liked this. I know that some poetry has "form" but to me, poetry is emotions and feelings and whatever form they come is how they should be shared. thank you again, hugggssss!!!!!!
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it's very descriptive. I had a flash back after reading this with my mother after my first broken heart. Keep up the great work.
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thank you for that wonderful comment. Like I said to someone else, this could be seen as a mother, or mother figure, or Jesus. whomever we turn to for the ultimate comfort and caring. thank you, hugggssss!!!!!
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Outstanding
I liked the simplicity of this poem. I thought you expressed your feelings with all a mother's love. I liked the sense of giving support and comfort. Also the way you have set out this poem which I thought added to the presentation. Brilliant to read.
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thank you for the wonderful comment, I really appreciate it. I never was good at following rules, lol, I guess that goes for poetry too. thanks again, huggggssss!!!!!
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This is so lovely...soothing and maternal. I felt calm reading your words. Sometimes all it takes is an overflowing heart to help one heal and grow.
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thank you so much for the very sweet comment on my poem, I really appreciate it, hugggsss!!!!!
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what a beautiful write! this poem speaks volumes of the role of a mother. this brings tears to the eyes and the heart. it is soul inspiring for a mom. thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. keep writing. i love your words! God bless you always
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thank you very much for the terrific comment, I am glad that it touched you like this. hugggsss!!!!!!
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a mothers love is so special , I have tears in my eyes after reading this poem , I know your a good mom
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thank you my dear friend, for the wonderful comment on my poem. You have such a tender heart, thank you, huggssss!!!!!
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Beautitul! Excellently written, and such a sweet poem about a mothers love and comfort for her little ones! A Righteous mother does show where that love lives!
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thank you for your comment on my poem. I really appreciate that. Your comments really help me, and I thank you for that.thank you Lord. hugggssss!!!!!!
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