Rejection accepted, emotional power over-flowing, endless power waining.
My emotions mixed, made complex by a simple thought, forever entwined.
Love that has never been seen, forced out, sorrow replacing the once love, forever harbored.
Anguish seen by all, understood by none, only one true hope remains.
Day of true and noble love, my loving soul shall flourish above all, not one other comparing.
I walk the wondrous and fine line of true love, the only love that never shall fail those who fallow, nothing in the way of my path.
No other shall fill this place of heart, for false love cannot fill it, true love keeps it filled.
Forced into the open, I accept thy fate, unlike many others before me, I shall not deny it.
I will love no matter what, until death decides to take me unto my endless journey, for she is and always will be the one for which I take part.
A contest entry
- * * * loving you forever ? * * * by The Hardest Goodbye.
450 points, ended December 28, 2007, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Life Changing...lots of options! by ShadowsMidnightRose.
1000 points, ended January 28, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I believe you have spelled "Follow" wrong, but it was very interesting. I like how you used words that not many people use. Great work and thank you for entering!
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For the contest
Option #1, choice B -
WOW, this was DEEP and very amazing!!!
thanks sooo much for entering it in my contest.
xo
kandy -
Yes I do like this a lot better great job on the change.
-Never give up
Kate -
Beautiful, such emotion in this piece. But the format that you have it in kind of takes away from the words of it. All in all this is a lovely write and i like your style very unique.
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I must agree with your previous statement
I agree that my previous background and font color were bad choices. Now that I have fixed the horrible error, what do you think? -
Better? Tell me what I should do...
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I think u should format this in poetry form to give the flow more clarity. Your writing level is high onsidering the rest here on AP. Youremoitons and sincerity speaks a high amount of volume i find your writing so interesting and since this is so sad I find is very haunting because of the feelings protayed so indepth.
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Thanks
I thank you for your kind words, I never really thought that my poems were so great, I wrote each one in about 15-30 minuets. Though I guess I did put alot of thought into them during the day, which is usually when I'm not so active, then I'd write them at night. Thanks again.
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No other shall fill this place of heart, for false love cannot fill it, true love keeps it filled.
this is how i feel about a certain someone who remains hidden somewhere in the shadows of my life for whatever reason.l you have written this well and it is something i can relate to very much.
thank you for sharing this with me. viyanna rosemarie
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