Why can’t I say the words I want to?
You make me feel warm and relieved like a blanket.
Every time I look into your eyes, I feel a rush over me.
A big burst of energy as if I’ve been sucked dry for years
Now blood is finally pumping through my veins.
My heart pounds, my hands sweat and I never find my breath
To say I love you.
A contest entry
- Mother nature meets cupid by bluecollarlove.
550 points, ended March 29, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love - i want it all! by eternitydemon.
332 points, ended September 16, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice
I'm about to write a poem of giving up my one true love.So understand yours.Thanks for entering -
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This is a great description of those moments when we find ourselves so taken by someone that we can't even express how we feel.
Nicely simple and effective. Keep writing and once more, welcome to the site. -
I think this is a cute and sweet poem. It's a lovely love poem. Pardon the pun...lol
Great work! Keep on writing!
<3 Jenerali
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