she doesn't belong here,
in this cold world.
shes so alone,
but such a wounderful girl.
they drove her away,
out of there life.
she could go back,
but she wont, not to fight.
people begain to notice,
the cuts on here arms and legs,
but they just ignored her,
because of that, it led to her death.
she just got tired,
of nobody ever caring,
and when she took her own life,
no one was even there.
no ones shoulder to sry on,
no one to tell her they love her,
she was so alone,
she didnt belong here.
on a piece of paper,
below her blood covered body,
was one last note,
to the only one SHE loved,
" i love you more,
than love itself,
could ever love.
good night for now, but only for a while."
Pease, tell me what you like about it and why.
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aww..this was an amazing write..you put so much emotion into it..i love it!!
~katie -
Great write, how ever you did do some grammar mistakes, you said tell here I believe its "tell her" and when you wrote nobody tell her I believe you want to say past tense nobody told her, other then that its a great write, very sad and emotional. Well done dear poet
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