You have crashed and fallen
into a pit that has no mercy
Demons feasting on your
insecurities as you grasped
to save yourself
Attending to your addictions
forgoing your creativity
hiding from those who
offer you familiarity
Surrounded by the streets
that call you by your name
Knowing you will answer
because your need is so desperate
Losing more battles with sanity
You succumb to the chaos of
the life it supplies
It has become all that you love
All that you hate
Balancing on life and death
With death having the power
I cant help you anymore
You are already gone
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wow amazing write ... the pix is awsome the ending is so sad
I cant help you anymore
You are already gone
well done great use of the title xXx cheeky xXx -
Very Good
That is two ecxellent poems in a row
I feel the desperation in this
That is the best we can do as writers
to bring the reader along with us
This is very well done
Like this
It has become all that you love
All that you hate
Balancing on life and death
With death having the power
I cant help you anymore
You are already gone
So Sad
Rick
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wow
this is amazing..the poem is almost pleading to be forgiven..gosh that sounds stupid but i know what i mean lol anyway i love this poem its bloody cracking well done you go girl!! this rocks
laura xxxxx -
Realistic
Deep penetrating write of addiction and the trap they are in.
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Wow...this is just magnificent(spelled right hey
Keep on penning,
XXJeannette
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Wow.....this is dripping with sadness...could almost be me...could have been me...these same words were said to me some time ago....at the time they did not mean anything but today...well it has saved me..the picture is awesome...Another amazing write...I soo love you!
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