Take my hand and Ill show you a place
of beauty majesty and grace.
a world untouched my war
where people love and adore.
let me take you there
to a world without despair.
where emerald fields stretch forever
and peace can be found wherever
let us live in a world where people care
where friends co-exist and share.
a world where no one is ever rude
a world where there is always enough food.
come with me my dear,
let us leave this world of fear.
we'll live forever in this world
and enjoy a love unfurled.
Author notes
Poetic movement
A contest entry
- NEO SOUL: POETIC MOVEMENT PT. 2 by cgirl0410.
400 points, ended March 20, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Only the Dreamers really live. by Angierie.
425 points, ended March 21, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oooh, very good sweetie! I would love to go to a place like that. It would be awesome.
I love it. Thanks for sharing with me. =)
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ooh. i wanna got to a place that has not been touched by war! can i come too??? keep up the great work!
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Very beautiful piece. Thanks for entering! Good luck in the contest. - cgirl0410
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it gave me a warm-fuzzy feeling. i like it very much. it's descriptive and i can picture such a place in my mind. i like it a lot. no thats not true...i love it!!!
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Please???
sounds great... but... it's a false hope of an immature child... such a place does not truly exist... unless regrets are never had.. and battles are surrendered... what a great poem lil wolf cub... love it. Really.. I do... -
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I can dream....
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Sounds like heaven to me! A world like that would be a miracle. Great write. Thanks for sharing.
Jeannie
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of course! Im glad you liked it! Im not really sure where it is, but it sounds amazing!
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