Asume again just like you did back then,
Maybe then I'll be better.
Forget the truth and deny me,
Maybe then I'll mend.
Ignorence is key they say,
So follow the flock and forget.
Pretend that it ever happened,
That I don't always fall in the end.
Still my heart remains broken,
My innocence captured.
My eyes still tear and my flesh is still stained,
Yet I remain the one to blame.
I wanted perfection, wanted to be pure,
But there's no room left in this life.
I'll walk alone through this antagonistic world,
In darkness, unable to face the light.
Shuned, outcasted, and beaten,
Over and over I rise, trying to voice what is right.
Forcing my frozen corps to continue,
When I have no will left to fight.
Ripping the flesh, watching it bleed,
Self-inflicted pain's the only air I breath.
Tears cloud my vision and blood washes away the pain,
It's cold when insanity is all that keeps you sane.
My screams howl beneath a starry sky,
Whispering winds carry away the hope that remains.
In reality I'm shatered, in mutilation I'm free,
The hatred finally draines from these fragile veins.
Author notes
this is a personal poem about stuff that I had in my head I just needed out......It's about abuse and denile...cutting and desperation..the usual for me I guess......whatever..if it sux just don't comment.
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Left Speechless
Oh my Gosh this is a brilliantly penned poem! this may be of the usual writes you do but you know this is not crap but this is an excellent poem. the way your poems flow and you add much needed feeling depth and e-motion into these poems is just brilliant. I really loved how well you penned this poem. very well done and keep up the very good work
Sincerely, Paul
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good job
wow tasha i can tell that thigns are not going the greatest for ya right now... this piece was so real it was scary adn to think how many other people feel this exact same way it was amazing... you are very tallented jsut remember that u have no poems that i thought suxed so dont forget that
keep the great workin coming
<3 Krissy
again lol great job
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I understand most of this poem, but I'm alittle bidazzled.....tell me if I'm wrong but one part says you don't give up, and they can't break you down, but then it's kind of like your dead inside. But you can free yourself through cutting even though no ne sees that pain inside, and they don't hear your scream. It was reat I LOVED IT!!! keep up the awesome work
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Well first of all it doesn't suck it's emotions dear and they mean a lot although it was painful to read cause mummy hates to see her daughter sad and stuff, but always know that you'll always have me to turn to
This poem carries so much in it and the flow as always is great, although there is one part that truly got to me and that's
My screams howl beneath a starry sky.... Dear hope lies within them and light does await, trust me.
Mummy
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