After all these years
I've learned
To cry silently
and yearned
for a reason to cry out
and yet
I can't succeed
My greatest wish will not come true
And after all these years
I've learned
To cry silently
Oh so silently
And now I cry
for you
For you
For you
My dear, for you
A contest entry
- Silence by KnightOfTheRose.
375 points, ended December 20, 2007, 34 entries
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Comments
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Great job on this! A beautifully written poem! Thank you for entering! Excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!
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I like the emphasis at the end! Like mark said, it is sweet, and definitely touching.
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sweet and touching, and well said.



