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Silently



After all these years
I've learned
To cry silently
and yearned
for a reason to cry out
  and yet
I can't succeed
My greatest wish will not come true
And after all these years
I've learned
To cry silently
Oh so silently
And now I cry
    for you
For you
    For you
My dear, for you

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    December 20, 2007

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    Great job on this! A beautifully written poem! Thank you for entering! Excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!



    -Steve-


  • Onionducks
    March 10, 2007
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    I like the emphasis at the end! Like mark said, it is sweet, and definitely touching.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 8, 2007
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    sweet and touching, and well said.