Absent of Absolution and Adherent to
The Abandonment of my Abduction
Is it an Aberration? Can I receive Amnesty for the Amended Antiquity
of my own Admissable Admonishment?
I’m an Adult,
but I consistently Adjust
the focus of my Affection
I need An Advil
this is causing my head to Ache
I feel so Ascetic And Abstinent
yet An Aerodynamically sound African-American
flying though the Air,
without An Agenda, on An Adventure
yet leading to the Allocation, Amplification and Arduous Articulation of my
Ambiguous Abstract
Spare no details, tell me exactly what you think about this...
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My brain hurts, and I need to go pull out my dictionary. lol The caps kind of get annoying though and they make it hard to read. Cool idea though.
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I don't like the caps
It would flow better...We can all see the words that start with a without having them capps...
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Whoa. Confusing.That is a lot of big words. My brain hurts now. I like it though.
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I think this was creative and that is certainly one of the focal points of poetry! It was light and carried a wonderful flow, you did a great job on this
Very creative and my pleasure to read ~Tia
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Gaak! A yankee! (sorry, I'm from Wisconsin...but I still prefer baked breaded cheese curds!) Hey! I could write a poem about baked breaded cheese curds! *lights shine down from heaven*!!!!!!!!!!
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OW!
After reading that, I need An Advil! TOO MANY BIG WORDS FOR ME! (I just got done working since 6:00 this morning...maybe it wasn't such a good idea to stay up and watch that movie...nah, it was too good!) Otherwise, nice poem! Did you use a dictionary? If you didn't, I envy your intellect!...Such...BIG...Words!.......*faints* -
DANG! That is cool!
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More than just an Advil
I think you need Anacin ans Anbesol as well after that mouthful. It's refreshing to see pieces that use the mind without sounding as if the poet is out to prove they have a superior intellect. Bravo Mr. Rabbit! -
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LOL
Wait until you see the next offering ... my "C".
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OK....*gulp* that's different and original allright, but I'm not sure I can manage such extensive vocabulary...You've managed quite an impressive piece here...
WOW!
rachel
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Yes, it is a mouthful!!
BUT, I believe in you, you can do it!!
Thanks for coming by and remember, there are 24 more letters to go!!!
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This is awesome Rabbit!
I have never read anything like this before.
Sounds like a great challenge though!
Thanks a lot for sharing this and keep
up the great work here!
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Jeremy ... I appreciate the compliment, I really do.
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No problem!
You are very welcome buddy, it's my pleasure!
Take care and have a great week ahead!
Jeremy
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wow...this is cool. Took some talent...something different and interesting....I like it. Great job, and good luck judging your contest! :-)
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Thank you!!
I appreciate your input and sincerity!
Thanks for the support in the contest too!!
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