People say there's no way this will work
We don't need their negative voice
Everyone around us is telling us no
We told them this was our choice
No one should influence us or our reasoning
We could care less about what they say
Race, skin color why does it matter?
We're in love and it's staying that way
The important thing is that we're together
Their world doesn't interest us now
No one on earth can stop this from happening
We've made that our goal, our vow
Author notes
This is about interracial(sp?) relationships
In a list
A contest entry
- Prewrites Preretites Prewrites! 2 by pain is love..
490 points, ended August 2, 139 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love love love the message here!
Love has no color, its just beautiful and for everyone.
Great job with this piece, good flow and imagery and some strong emotions here.
Bravo
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Good topic.
I am glad it's not as much of an issue as it used to be.
Congrats!
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Great topic thnak you so much for the entery!
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great poem
I love this poem. It's a lot like my style actually. I like the flow and the topic and the title was perfect. If I had to chose something for you to improve, it would be to add a few more descriptive words in there. Other than that, it was great. Take care,
- Chris
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I like your style
your thoughts and yup why should people judge you for sharing love no matter your race or creed
Loved it
Thanks and best wishes
Julie
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of course it would work, smiles, a beautiful poem, thank you for entering
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'The important thing is that we're together
Their world doesn't interest us now
No one on earth can stop this from happening
That's something we will not allow'
beautiful write. I love this stanza.
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Beautiful work! We are all the same colour underneath our skins. You did a wonderful job on this piece, You have added a wonderful voice to this, and the emotion runs deep throughout. Great write! Thankyou for entering my contest, and Good Luck!
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Wonderful poem
So simplistic and so beautuful. Don't you wish that everyone could get along. I really like your poem it is exsactly what I have been looking for. People really need to realize that no matter your skin color, what laungage you speak, or how much money you have that every one is a person. I love what this poem says and it says it is a amazingly poetic way.
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Beautiful poem
It's not the people who are in love, but the people or society around them in their unfounded beliefs. I thank you so much for sharing this with me and good luck in your challenge...
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it's different.. simple.. and usualish. i like it tho... cuz other people shouldn't care. good luck
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Good as always!
A very true and stright to the point work. this is the way all true love should be.
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this was so true in meaning! i hate how nowadays people are resrticted by the beleifs they grew up with. i grew up with the thinking that the races shouldnt mix. after 16 years of that bull, i said enough was enough and i threatened to move out if my parents didnt change their way of thinking. thanks for having the courage to write this, it may open up alot of people's minds to new ideas!
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Nice Write
This is a nice write of feelings and beliefs and i am honored to have it in this contest thank you so much for entering....Michael
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