It's just a matter of time till i'll be
Raking the coals over you.
You burnt me good with your lies and alibies.
Stepping out on me, doing as you please.
Well you burnt me good.
Iv'e put the fire out theres nothing left
but embers.
Slowly burning what's left to my heart.
you may have burnt me good.
But it won't be long now.
soon i'll be raking the coals over you.
# 2 Which way To Outta Here?
Loving you puts me onto many roads to nowhere.
the first road sign says One Way.
If I head down that road, well i'm loving you.
There will be no turning back.
I don't want down the dead end road.
Before we even got things started, we'd be stuck
at a dead end.
I'd like to know before we go to far.
Which way to outta here?
# 3 Cruising Past Heaven
Cruising past Heaven is the only hope I have.
she done me wrong so many times before.
Leading me to believe I was the luckiest man alive.
i felt like I had my very own piece of Heaven.
But I was wrong, she appears to be Angelic
but she's not.
she stomped on my heart and filled me with good
intentions, and phony lies.
She might have been called Heaven but she's a vixen
in disguise.
she's selfish to the core.I learned the hard way
about Heaven.
For all her evil ways, she left me running
for the door.
Now days I'm cruising past Heaven.
Author notes
i just wrote this for a contest. Titles.The picture of the lady is my cousin Janis from the states she is playing the poko chelo. she also plays the saw.
A contest entry
- Songs, Songs and more Songs by Dark Soul Reaper.
360 points, ended October 25, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Land of Your Dreams by Serene Rose.
700 points, ended April 26, 2008, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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oh wow. I like these
I just...I don't know.There just something about it that draws me in. The rebellioness of is something that I truly loved.
Thanks for entering!
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Hmm... this is different. I like it though. Keep up the hard work.
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Wonderful Lyrics
Hello, Your song is awesome. I so love the lyrics. I can relate to it with my ex husband. Sounds just like him. Keep writing!!! You take care, Sandy
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BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO
well done here. Extraordinary effort, and I can see it all now,
Grand Ol Opry nominations for song writer are***PENTIBABE** lets give them a round of applause. Best of luck to you poet but it seems, you stole the audience.
HEEEHAWWWW
VSUTTON from Texas lol the country western state
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I do like country music and this is just what they always sing about - all that's needed is the titles in this contest though. You sure went to a lot of extra work on these entries.
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SPECTACULAR!!
This is a MASTERFULLY written piece of work. You know
you might just be able to get on the Grand Ole opry.
really I love every single line in this and I will be
singing this for a long time. You are so very talented!
every line is my favorite!! I love Country Music!!
my favorite artist Patsy Cline Now What a BEAUTIFUL
voice she had!! I love all kinds of music. I Love it!!
You did a MASTERFUL job and thank you so very
much. I can not wait till you write another one.
Well Done My Dear Poet.
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great lyrics here! i am not into country music but some are. you did a great job on these! keep writing and letting your inner light shine! God bless you always
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Bravo!
I have to give credits here to the poet for making up new lyrics for both of these songs. It takes alot of work. So Bravo for the effort and hope you win the contest!
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