oh boy on the bus who i barely know
what am i doing with you?
why does your touch feel so good?
why do i crave your lips on mine?
some times it makes me wonder wether i still love him?
but for now i don't care
your embrace takes the worry and unsureance away
for nowyou are me escape from the world
you are my backbone
the one who keeps me whole
for now...
until i get home
A contest entry
- In love or lust? by Myjoy.
450 points, ended April 3, 2007, 16 entries
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sweet.
even if it is lust; lust can still be fun!! =]
great write.
thankyou for entering my contest & good luck =]
♥ jade
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So is it love or lust?? It's so hard because I think this is a really sweet yet defective write. Not what I am looking for. Good though.
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"for nowyou are me escape from the world
you are my backbone
the one who keeps me whole
for now..."
Girl, that is DANGEROUS. You can't rely on a guy to complete you. YOU are the only one who can complete you...I don't want you to go through the hell I went through to find that out....well, good poem anyways, but those lines kinda clouded it. =\
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DUDE! If this is about Jeff, i would actually laugh.
But all in all, good poem. -
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nope not jeff
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whom mon cherie
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not jeff mwwwhahaha you have to guess
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the man
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??????
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tell me, vamp!
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