raise my hands to the sky
raise my voice to the heavens
ignore those that pass by
I won't stop just for them
say your name, say I know
say that I am here finaly
I'll never be scared to show
hat i know that you love me
Chorus Starts:
you've always held my hand
you've always been right next to me
and now i understand
that never did you leave
you kept me from falling down
if i turned you made me right
so I stand before you now
to thank you for my life
:Chorus Ends
the rain comes down slowly
so soft and tenderly
and i know you are saying
how much you love me
I dance around in joy
thanking you for your mercy
I have escaped the devils ploy
so now it's just you and me
Chorus One Time
I was blind now i see
that you've always been there
standing right next to me
showing that you do care
and now I only feel love
I feel your great being
I know your watching from above
and you inspire my voice to sing
Chorus Two Times
you've helped me see that your love is true
and after all, now I only want to thank you
Author notes
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much luv~
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Please tell me what you think
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This work was considered in an effort to qualify you to apply for judgeship in the Raven Contest.
(It is often interesting to see how well poetry lends to song writing. I feel this work needs development, but it flowed very nicely in my head as I read.) -
very nicely done
i can see this as a lyric or a poem a very heart felt song of praises.. well written and well done...PK
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Thankyou so much for commenting& th applause!
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