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- Cradle to Grave -

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Cradle to grave of gold digger’s terrain
where Atlantis slept under ocean’s domain
of watercolors dispersed to elude the eager
below depths,  desolate appearance plain.

Statues erected,  worth crumbled to ground
into opened shallow pockets,  darkness bound.
Jewels scattered around coral condominium,
priced paid by scavengers disruption of compound.

Sharks ambush,  attack unfamiliar movements.
Ripples reach shorelines,  crimson circumvents
near stone faced mute in sun dial direction,
impartial to the next series of catastrophic events.


     

 

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    March 9, 2007
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    Holy Moly!! You had done it again! Dang this is awesome. I wish to have 1/10 of your talent! I bow at your feet oh great one!! Congratulations on the trophy, but it is pure Gold to me.

    Jeannie


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    March 9, 2007

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    wow! i was going to enter this contest but opted not to. now i know why. i would not have stood a chance. thank you for sharing this with me. viyanna rosemarie


    • Desire gold member
      March 9, 2007
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      My comment reward thingy is on strike or something..
      it won't work Ack...
      Thank You for the comment and You would have written a fabulous piece I imagine...
      Appreciate Your Sweet words...
      The picture just spoke..

      Many blessings to You
      Best wishes too
      and much love~ Desire~*~


  • PerfectImperfection
    March 9, 2007

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    Beautiful imagery; well detailed interpretation of the picture chosen. Great flow throughout. Good luck to you in the contest!


  • Lady Lacrymosa
    March 9, 2007

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    love it.

    this is really amazing.
    i love the imagery!!great write...there's really nothing to say about this piece other than how amazing it is.


  • bird-mad girl
    March 8, 2007

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    "Sharks ambush, attack unfamiliar movements.
    Ripples reach shorelines, crimson circumvents
    near stone faced mute in sun dial direction,
    impartial to the next series of catastrophic events."

    --a.maz.ing.

    okay.
    can't function.
    can't find the words.
    wow.

    soooooooo outstanding

    lots of love

  • Allenrintem
    March 8, 2007
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    Original and unusual.


  • penman gold member
    March 8, 2007
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    Amazing

    This was amazing love. Really great. Good luck in the contest.

  • afireinthisheart
    March 8, 2007

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    awesome

    As with Atlantis...there's many places that are concealed in various places, where in the future times, will be revealed...what is found, probably will never be explained, for the comprehension was lost over the years...this earth changes daily and what we see now, will be a passing memory to the survivors of the future..life itself, is a metamorphasis, and the stories then to be told...awesome write...smile...hugs and love...David

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