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Drowning In Dreams

What purpose do dreams serve
Those images only make me weak
If only I could close my eyes
And have the stars surround me

I'd sleep so sound every night
With only my ghosts to disturb me
The darkness would overshadow
Me and my hopeless aspirations

I taste the bitter past
And swallow down my memories
Former selves settle in my nerves
Forcing my muscles into atrophy

I'm drowning in my own mind
Along with all those faded faces
Please God can you help me
And make sure I never wake again

Author notes

Not really sure. For once I would like to remember how it feels to wake up and actually be glad that I did.

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  • Innocent-Harlot
    March 16, 2007
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    Hi.
    Call me,Id critque you but i dont have to, its sad and wonderful.