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sideways, backwards, upside down

sideways backwards and upside down
driving my way through Chin Town
Let go of the wheel to act like a clown
sideways backwards and upside down

sideways backwards and upside down
One little bump and the car is a frown
frontwards backwards not right now
sideways backwards and upside down

sideways backwards and upside down
never again in China Town

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  • Grey Mouser
    March 10, 2007

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    Nice little sing song feel to this, it reads very well and spins the tale of one night that won't happen again.
    Thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,

    Mouser


  • Tenshi Asakura
    March 8, 2007

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    ha! i like that one, its funny and quirky yet enteraining in the end. its almost like a rap. Anyway good poem. keep up the good work my friend.