The Grim Reaper
Has taken over
The earth
With the help of McDonalds
The dynamic duo
Has destroyed
Future
Past
Present
There is only Never
The earth’s occupants
Are lead by a clock
Which tells them when
To work
Eat Big Macs
Sleep
Justice
Liberty
And Freedom
Have been replaced by
Obedience
Obedience
And obesity
Welcome to the world of
The future
Author notes
pic #5
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration........... by Lyre-Bird-.
530 points, ended March 9, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Nothing is ever really random, is it??? by bw43.
300 points, ended March 12, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well, this was different. It kind of made me grossed out thinking about McDonald's... I actually hate their burgers... eew... they taste... fake.
Anyway, I like the way you make it seem llike the entire world is just a slave to McDonald's... like somehow there is a big conspiracy with McDonald's and maybe they put something in their food to addict you and make you their slave.
thank you for the thought-provoking entry and good luck in the contest.
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Very thought provoking take on the picture chosen. Good luck to you in the contest!
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LMAO
dude...thats hilarious!! *falls over laughing* -
ROFL!!! The grim reaper and Mc Donalds...that cracked me up sooo much!! This one heck of a poem, friend. Excellent write! Good luck in the contest!
<3 Jenerali
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