You are the stepping stones on a rapidly flowing stream
With one foot at a time you safely guide me across my troubles
You are consistently making sure that I don’t get swept away by life’s crazy currents
A sure footing, a firm standing, that is what you provide
You offer a secure passage through my wildly unpredictable course of life
You are my stepping stones
Please tell me what you think
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I like the metaphors. That was really good.
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This is a very powerful piece you have penned. The message behind it is powerful too. The way that it is writen is very easy to read which gets this message across to most all who read it. Thank you for sharing and best wishes to you. Keep that pen handy dear poet. ~Midnight Lace
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I have problems when an inanimate object(s) can do all of this. You use the word "you" as if it is a real person rather than just stones.
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It's a metaphor. The stones represent a person(s)
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This is beautiful.. left me with a serene and peaceful feeling. Reads like it is spiritual but then again- I am spiritual. Could also be a love or mentor.. still spiritual..
I really enjoyed this. Blessings. Debby
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this could be taken as either a Spiritual write or one to a significant other. either way it is fantastic. thank you for sharing this with me tonight. viyanna rosemarie
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wow
i love the emotion and the way you use your words so it seems like there is only that word that would fit... great job and keep up the great work!!! -
nice man i like it. religious? could easily be. nice thought though.. out of all the things in the entire world that you need most, having a rock in a hard place makes everything a hole lot easier
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very true and honest
you are my stepping tone
wiould sincerly believe you
your writting is good. I lov ehow their are no grammars are spelling
I see the imageges of you walking above the stones how she stands as you watch
the beauty of love how find it in the stones
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"With one foot at a time you safely guide me across my troubles" was my favorite part. this flows nicely and has a ring to it that i can't describe...
good job!
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