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Pull over, would you?

 

In my rear view mirror I can see the flashing red,

now I have to make a plan and it's just dead ahead.

Put the pedal to the metal (Hang on) now this is it,

now there going to illegally want to search my shit!

The car hit the curb hard and flew up into the air,

as I heard the cop say; "He ain't goin anywhere"

So I climbed out the car door down onto the lawn,

just about the time for me to see all the guns drawn.

I heard; you have any idea what I was stoppin ya for?

"You was doin thirty-five in a thirty-four!".....Damn.

 

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    May 9, 2007

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    LMAO I could picture this happening, this made me laugh and I needed that today.... superb write here full of wit and humour

    Karen


  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    March 19, 2007

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    hehe i liked the ending! i was all on the edge of my seat and that ending just made me laugh lol
    MINDIE


  • Bee gee silver member
    March 11, 2007
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    Caught my eye

    I like this poem it was neat.I saw that picture before. real nice job with the poem and picture imagine a car ends up like that.you never know how one ends up if there chased by the police.I've saw those police videos and some people are nuts.good luck in the contest. Brenda


  • Grey Mouser
    March 10, 2007
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    Really officer I had no clue I was speeding. I thought you had to be after someone else and was just tryin to get out of your way. Have seen that ending before 'cept the guys were speeding.
    Thanks for your entry into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,

    Mouser


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 9, 2007

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    lol, okay, this was good i have seen that pic before but this is a great poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • kathy1967
    March 8, 2007

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    WONDERFULLY WRITTEN!!

    Love it, love it, and love it some more!! what a fine piece

      of writting!! so very real and so very true!! I been there and

       I done that!! Love the PICTURE!! I love every single line in

          this but my favorite is:  Now I have a plan, it's just dead

           ahead!! so very real and true!! you are so very talented!!

             Thank You!!


  • Whoochi gold member
    March 8, 2007

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    Much applause to you as you have captured the picture quite well...loved the ending...our mind gets carried away and allows us to do plain dumb stuff and runs with our insanity! good job! Good luck!

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