I see your pain, your hurts, and your problems
You know I see them
Why do you continue to hide them?
I have three sets of eyes
One set sees your outside
One set sees you for who you are
The other sees more, like pain and suffering
Why close up?
I’m here to help you
I see a lot, why do you resist telling me about the pain?
You may not be able to see your heart and its pains, but I do
I’m here to help, let me help you
I see more than you want me to see
Open up, and let me help
A contest entry
- No, This Is Me and Mine! by x Gemini x.
600 points, ended March 9, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything. by Escape--.
525 points, ended March 13, 2007, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Nothing is ever really random, is it??? by bw43.
300 points, ended March 12, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well this was different. It was nice.... how the speaker is there for the intended reader/listener of this piece. I liked the whole having three eyes part... that was very interesting.
thank you very much for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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Hm...
Interesting. Creative.
Good flow, and imagery.
Easily related to.
Nice
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I like this poem alot , sounds like someone you know is hurting
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