in manitoba's fierce
winter midnight chill
frozen fairies woke
and skated diamond etchings
of feathery mountainside evergreens
that transformed morning's light
to scattered rainbow gems
gently i'd lay my palm
on fragile paradise
awed and disappointed
i'd missed them again.
fifteen years later
hundreds of miles south
they found me again
and pirouetted swan feathers
on the saturn's cold green roof
my astonished stepfather gaped
"have you ever seen
anything like it?"
and after thousands
of lost fantasies
fairies became possible
again
Please tell me what you think
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wow. i love reading what you write. this is very good and i love the emotions and views that you put in this peice. great job
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I m jealous, I wish i could see the world in that perspective, this is beautyfull to say the least, an incentive to dream...
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awesome. This caught my attention... even without a title. Very well written and portrayed. I should read more of your poems... Youve read plenty of mine. Sorry I havent been as generous. <3 have a good weekend.
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hey, don't worry about it. I'm glad you enjoyed it. i know it's not as good as it could be, but it's at least a start.
thanks!!
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