Is this just a bad hair day
Or because I went astray?
You served my breakfast with no word
Crashing plates was all I heard.
I `d rather that you raised the roof
Than being haughty and aloof.
If I send twelve roses in
Please don`t dump them in the bin.
Say I`m sorry, feeling sad
Never wanted to be bad.
Can we not make up and kiss
Your lovely smile I really miss.
Won`t stay out with mates no more.
Come home from work at half-past four.
What can I do to end this frost
Before too late, our love is lost?
Shall I get down on one knee
And sing a love song, just for thee?
You have my heart, dont let it go
That would be a bitter blow.
A contest entry
- Unbearable Silences by xkhiemster.
300 points, ended March 17, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Awh! Tis so sweet. Who could stay made with poems and roses.Lovely piece of apologetic poemy.Adored this!~~P.S. I take it,she forgave? Both are still together.
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You were lucky you didn't wear that breakfast, you naughty boy! A sad and true to life situation, written in great rhyming style that you do so well. Bes wishes in the contest.
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