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Bum Poem

Shove your finger up your bum
All the way, try not to come;
Bring down a lump of shite
Isn't that a lovely sight?

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  • Cyanide Dreams Greeters member
    April 5, 2009

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    Wow, quite graphic, and I'm not sure how this fits into the contest. If you'd clarify that up that'd be great. But you do have some wonderful, but nasty imagery going on here. It made me giggle though. Great wrtie and good luck.

    Josh


  • Bartholomew Mole
    April 10, 2007

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    Totally filthy. Not so sexy either. But you got some truth there Engy (may Barty call you Engy please say yes to little Barty der Mole). Bist du schwul?