I'm stuck here in a ((fight)) with words,
they can't seem to come out
and every word I s p e a k
I contradict it all and t a k e it back the next.
By doing this I lost a piece
so close to me,
love with another was b.u.r.n.e.d to ashes
and blown away in the {{silent}} wind.
Impossible to see,
never to be found again.
So why should I write here with [confidence]
when all I've ever felt
has always been {[ignored]}
because my mind isn't s-t-r-a-i-g-h-t
with the state of my [♥]heart[♥].
But why should I change
when everything just [[stays]] the same?
when all we seemed to have been
has always been a lie.
I miss those days when we
were moving f.o.r.w.a.r.d
to become all we were destined to be.
And maybe destiny forced us a p a r t
so we could both be something
that we can't be together.
And now we've both been
pushed into the dark
and I'll stay up all night
with these bloodshot e.y.e.s
but I feel so much better
now that you and I are done forever.
This hurts my heart[♥]
but eases my overworked mind.
And now, as my eyes r e l e a s e
the final tears for you
and my mind forgets
all of what you've ever been.
My [heart] erases the part
that feels for you
because your [heart] erased
the part of you
that f e l t for me in r e t u r n.
M. M. O'Malley
3-7-07
4:42 p.m.
Author notes
I hope this works for you darling.
I Love you Dearly.
♥ ♥
A contest entry
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Awh, so sad.
And thank you for entering babes.
xxx
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well thank you hon.
ily.
♥
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"But why should I change
when everything just [[stays]] the same?"
good question... anyway, great rite. good luck in my contest!
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its an incredibly good question.
and thanks so much. happy judging.
♥Love
[[Chaos]]
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So why should I write here with [confidence]
when all I've ever felt
has always been {[ignored]}
because my mind isn't s-t-r-a-i-g-h-t
with the state of my [♥]heart[♥].
But why should I change
when everything just [[stays]] the same?
when all we seemed to have been
has always been a lie.
I miss those when we
were moving f.o.r.w.a.r.d
to become all we were destined to be.
And maybe destiny forced us a p a r t
so we could both be something
that we can't be together.
sweetie. you always know exactly how im feeling, & you're always there for me, & thats what i love the mostmostmostest about you. im so greatful to have you around, we havent talked in a while, we need to catch up, message me?
this poem was amazing, btw. you rock, boo!
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It seems like you and I are going through a lot of the stuff right now. Considering you and I both lost one of the closest people to us within a few days. For reasons we don't even fully understand. I'm always going to be here for you darling, never doubt it for a minute.
I'm grounded right now so it's going to be awhile before I can.
Hopefully the contest goes well.
Love you
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It seems like you and I are going through a lot of the stuff right now. Considering you and I both lost one of the closest people to us within a few days. For reasons we don't even fully understand. I'm always going to be here for you darling, never doubt it for a minute.
I'm grounded right now so it's going to be awhile before I can.
Hopefully the contest goes well.
Love you
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Doll
I love you so much.
You better win in the contest ♥
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I hope I win too.
I love you too darling
♥ ♥
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excellent
This is beautiful, you write with such emotion. Your thougths flow so well. The content is beautiful. Sometimes it seems they erase, what was shared, because they want you to believe that. but remember that is was also a year of your life. Yours to reflect upon and not. If it was a year that brought you happiness than it was not wasted. Just a year of lesson learned and memories made. I love what you have done with this piece.
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Thanks hon.
The year was amazing that we shared, but now it's over, but I fully believe that he really just stopped loving me. Cause you can't just stop loving someone. It's mentally impossible as well as emotionally. and I would never believe that is was wasted no matter what I've said before.
But again thanks so much hon for the comment.
Love you
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wow. this is so beautiful, like all of your work. amazing job lovie, good luck in the contest.
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Thanks hon for the comment.
He told me that he didn't feel for me anymore. And that hurt more than anything because that's a year of my life I can't ever get back.
I hope she likes this entry.
Love
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