The living fog twines around my wrist
This fallen cloud seems to have a hit list
Strangling, wrapping, around my throat
How did I end up in this boat?
Munching, crunching, on my bones
I’m screaming into the night, morbid tones
I pull away from the entrancing cloud
I scream in pain as I fall to the ground
Please tell me what you think
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i love this poem i loved
Munching, crunching, on my bones
I’m screaming into the night, morbid tones
I pull away from the entrancing cloud
I scream in pain as I fall to the ground
this was my favorite part of them poem , ilove you style of writing, i thought that this was a nice emotional write, keep writing, i look forward to reading all your poems i havent read so far,
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ah! i love all ur stuff, u r awesome. u r one of the very few writers that actually have some good rhymes. but one suggestion. i know if u tried freestyle u would kick ass lol. good luck
[hope u take my advice!] <3
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nicly pone very emotional
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Whoa ! very nice write nice job well done
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