Inspiration.
Sometimes it can wait a lifetime to come,
and it's useless when you find it sometimes.
A meaning or a feeling, or a question,
that you look for untill you can't feel anything.
So what does happen when we die?
We won't know untill we get there
and who has that time to wait?
most of the time we forget the question.
lost in the waiting process,
for inspiration to come
like shards of light,
through a steel paned window
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration........... by Lyre-Bird-.
530 points, ended March 9, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very Nice
Excellent poem and a very well rounde done at that. I just love how well you sweetly penned this poem and I also love how good you did with this poem. what makes me marvel and smile the most is how incredibley indepth this poem is and the title is just superb. I swear sweetay this is the last comment on your poem tonight since its 11:30 am there and 3:30 am here but any ways excellent poem and keep on penning away sweetay and keep on doing what you do
Love Always, Paul 
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So what does happen when we die?
We wont know untill we get there
And who has that time to wait?
Most of the time we forget the question
<33 that xxxxxx
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Thank you for entering the contest!!!!!!
Hope you have enjoyed the contest as much as we have enjoyed reading your entry
Best of Luck
Tracey -
first. I love the picture. haunting and eerrie. looks like something out of a tim burton movie. me likeys very much
I really liked the first stanza a lot. The tone and words you used to describe it made me think of writer's block where you feel the emotion but the words are jammed and can't pour out.
I also loved the descriptions in the rest of the piece, they were beautiful in a ghostly way.
A very deep and thought provoking piece you have composed dearest. the perfect thing to read after finishing up The Great Gatsby
All these intellectual writings are making me feel quite smart!
Love you forever && ever ♥
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Magnificent-
Magnificent piece You have penned my Friend
The images just tug and emotions are felt...
Questions asked and answers the reader can summize~
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Great piece to reflect the emotion behind the picture chosen. Outlining a struggle to break free that was denied hope, all simply 'waiting'. Good luck to you in the contest!
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I like this poem! You incorporated the picture very nicely and I also enjoyed the questions you asked in this. Great write! Good luck in the contest
<3 Jenerali
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