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Searching

I'm searching for love--
the glue that binds us
to the human race,
the mark of grace
in a world of pain.

I'm looking for one
who'll be my guide,
who'll light the way
before I stray
or go insane.

I'm seeking hope,
forgiveness, redemption:
is anyone there
to banish despair
and mend my soul?

Still searching for love--
can love be found?
Oh, where is she
who is meant for me,
to fulfill love's role?

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  • cgirl0410 silver member
    March 13, 2007
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    Nice piece. Thanks for entering! Good luck in the contest. - cgirl0410


  • Spiritvision angel
    March 8, 2007

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    Great write bill! Its sad we cant all find the love we search for. I enjoyed this heartfelt write and wish you all the best in the contest.


  • Smirnoff Ice
    March 8, 2007

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    Another strong piece Bill, as I say to my young daughter who tells me she is ugly (not that sheis)there is someone for everyone, though someone who is perfect doesn't exsist lol!!!!A well written pice Bill well done

    • Bad Bill
      March 8, 2007
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      Cheers, Smirnoff--glad you like it. Yep, there's someone for everyone, but you don't always find 'em!
      Regards,
      Bill


  • Jeneralix
    March 8, 2007

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    Awww... I feel your plea. This is one heck of a poem and I love your title. Definitely a love poem! Great write and good luck in the contest!
    <3 Jenerali

    • Bad Bill
      March 8, 2007
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      Thank you, Jenerali, for your kind response and for wishing me luck--much appreciated.
      Bill

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