You shattered my dreams
broke my hopes
and tore the life I knew to taters
but you little black bitch
can't take my pride
Where the peices of shattered dreams lay
I built new ones
where broken hope settled
I used super glue patients and strenghth
and where the taters of my old life fluttered to the ground
I weaved a new one
So little black bitch
you can't take my pride
and I will always be better than you
I will always be a better person
Author notes
I hate the girl I wrote this about she ruined the way life used to be and she has killed or lamed several horses and in my mind to kill an animal someone else loves and feel no remorse is inhuman. She is a bitch there is no other word. This is for you Al I hope you read it and know what I think of you even though I've told you so many times. Update: She killed another horse, it was long term but it's her fault he's dead. that makes 4 and the lamed.
This is for option 12.
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what are you talking about here exactly? How did she kill these horses? or cause them to go lame? She would have to be jumping horses that were not prepared to jump? or what? Let me know will you ?
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YAY! This is soo good, I love how you used the animal rights theme and the I HATE YOU theme. Good Job. AND good luck. I agree She should die. -
"WOW" I must say in the beginning I didn't know where you were going with this. But soon it became clear how this person had influenced your life.
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Thank you very much for entering this contest. I should be able to add much more of a comment on this later on since there are so many other submissions.
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haha yes she is molato (sorry if I miss spelled it) but that is NOT why I said black bitch it is cuz she is sneaky and like Idk alot of the shit that she did I thought about at night so I have always asosiated her with the dark. *shrugs* I'm not racist.
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okay, because you man, no need to bring race, in this, lol, but this is a strong poem, i can see that you hate this person a lot, keep it flowing
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