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Jus'' Imagining

I was thinkin'
If I died would you regret bein angry at me?
Or would you even come to my funeral meet?

What if I died, and all these poems were unleashed
Only for the world to see

All my secrets revealed
Showing how much you mean to me

If the choice came to me now of...

Chase you forever and receive disappointment for death

I'd let my pride be diminished and chase you every step

Jus' to be rejected

I'm sorry I left...


Name:  Rayvon Grayson
Email Address:  yourstrulyme@tmail.com
Private Voicemail for comments: 347 417 5616
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Author notes

Jus' thinkin. Since we're not speaking.. Would my poetry change anything?

Ever think this way?

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  • Melissa Loves Jeffy
    November 17, 2007

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    This is so amazing I could hardly manage to put in words. Its so deep and real and everyone wants to ask that but are to afraid to. You are a very talented writer. I love your style . Keep writing!


  • cgirl0410 silver member
    November 7, 2007

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    So surreal this piece. It makes a person want to put things in perspective. Which I'm sure you want this person to do. I feel you on this piece. Great write. - cgirl0410


  • q-pid
    October 4, 2007
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    Damn... this is deep as hell yo


  • Kspoet
    March 16, 2007

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    Thats sad...I dunno, I hope they will find it in their heart to forgive this person who has left them (which I assume is you but I don't know). I'm sure things will turn out as they should...
    ~KS