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As I Am

Is there more in outer space,
Than here inside my mind?
Is it full of turbulence and turmoil
Like my life?
Is there so much movement, in its chaos,
That it’s hard to keep it straight?
Does it ache?
But even so, surely,
It has never been as empty,
As I am.

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  • lovingwife
    March 9, 2007

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    ahh the questions everyone is faced with and to be totally honest i think the mind has more depth and perception than the darkest depths of space. good write!