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A Birthday Poem?!

I would write you a birthday poem,
But I don't know how to...
Anyways, I love you lots,
Here are some hugs for you!

(Maybe it is the writer's block
That makes me sound quite funny. )
If you were not that far away,
You'd get a jar of honey!

Speedy is your name I know,
I'd love to see you race,
And tell you just how great you are
One day from face to face!


But... wait a moment! Didn't you
Say just yesterday
That you do not like honey?
*ducks and runs away*

I'm sorry Sis, I didn't know,
I'll give you something else...
But what nice thing would be alright?
A lovely dinner bell?

Oh, now I know what I have got
To send across the sea!
It is... MYSELF, and "Mon Chéri",
Bought in Germany!

Author notes



Mon Chéri...

The Mon Chéri is a single-wrapped, praline-sized combination, consisting of a "heart" of cherry, floating in a special liqueur and contained in a plain chocolate housing. (wikipedia)

That article also says they are not sold in the US...?

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  • DJ Harley silver member
    April 16, 2007
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    lovely poem LittleAnn congrat on your HM
    I know she like the poem for her.
    John

  • Meggh LotusMay
    April 6, 2007
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    Well written, and nice and random! How do you manage to rhyme through your randomness!!! Keep writing, Meggh xxxxxxxxxxxx


  • slipperssun gold member
    March 9, 2007

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    thank you for your entry into my contest for Devilish, i am sure she will appreciate the greatness of what you have penned. good luck
    cheers
    Jen


  • tawk gold member
    March 8, 2007

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    This is such a cute birthday poem, I am sure that they will love it. Excellent flow and good luck in the contest


  • The Poetic Angel
    March 8, 2007

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    awww lil cuz...this is a fantasstik birfday poem... good luck in the contest ..cheeky xXx xXx


  • sommerregen
    March 8, 2007

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    This poem is so cute!!! ♥ A wonderful birthday gift... ♥


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 8, 2007

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    Aww I like this A great birthday poem for someone you seem to know very well
    Good luck to you in this contest.
    Gaylene

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