I wanted you< to show me some passion
But you rammed it in me, in dog fashion
You were in a hurry, and oh so quick
Just thinking of you, and your fucking prick
You are a pig, and think i`m dumb
Just somewhere to spurt your cum
Ramming your cock, in my vagina walls
For one reason, to empty your balls
Well i`ve had enough, you really suck
You are not even, an average fuck
No idea at all, how to use your tongue
Because you are selfish, not too young
Would it really be such a crime?
If only once you took your time
Take it slowly, show some heart
You`re always finished, before i start
You really are a selfish sod
Only interested in blowing your wad
As you go off into a spasm
I wonder when, will I orgasm
Then you roll over and go to sleep
I think you are a fucking creep
And nothing but a lousy bum
Guess i`ll get myself, to cum
I don`t mind being a masturbator
I have one big, awesome vibrator
A great big nob and ears on it
It does wonders to my clit
Then i think, all men are bloody fools
As i start cumming,and in multiples
You think your smart and i`m so cute
But you are one lousy, pethetic root
To you, foreplay, is me, sucking your cock
If you you kissed me i`d be in total shock
And you think thats sex,well think again
You are all arseholes, you fucking men
Please listen, and do take note
Sex is more than me, doing deep throat
You are allowed, to show me some affection
Not just leap at me, with an erection
There is more to sex, than just a screw
Women also, need pleasuring too
Not just here, for a quickfire fuck
So be careful, don`t push your luck
If you learn to give, and not just take
I may get over, that rotten headache
And if you are more considerate, in the sack
You may find that, I will even fuck back
But until then, you selfish prick
Go get fucked, you make me sick
Yes go and stroke your gristle bone
And i`ll also get pleasure, on my own
Go away, and while on your treks
Try to learn something, about sex
Go to a whorehouse, and while your in it
Practise lasting longer, than a minute
I know you are a healthy big buck
But also a useless and lousy fuck
Take your cock and give it a stroke
Because i`m not here, for you to poke
Do you think is a race, and you must win it
Sex should last longer, than one short minute
Women would like you, to take more time
A nice long fuck is just, so devine
But right now, get out of my sight
You are not getting a fuck tonight
And if you get a swollen nob
Just give yourself a handjob
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Comments
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thanks for the entry, this doesn't quite fit into the topic of dirty pretty but thanks anyway for submitting it.
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Pure anger expressed very well. Definately wouldn't be the person on the other end of this.
I liked the bluntness of it.
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Wow.. I can feel the emotion pouring out of this one.. Sing it loud for all them to hear.. This is a poem of pure wisdom and truth..





