Is this all there is to life
Blank faces
(What are they thinking)
Staring
Looking around
Hours are going by
Got to get myself motivated
Can't stay here much longer
If I do
I know it
I'll become a blank face too
Author notes
"Short poems"
In a list
A contest entry
- I Love Short Poems by silverscent.
430 points, ended March 11, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, again, another good write that I can relate to! I used to smoke a lot of pot, and I remember those blank faces all to well. It was so easy to escape from reality. Please, keep up the good work!
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Great Writing!!!!!!
this is what makes short poetry so great!!! loved the imagery you have set in motion with so minimal. awsome in the way this flows so naturally and oh so well. overall, definitely one to bookmark!!!
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The subtleness of this was quite powerful. The idea of being a blank face is thought provoking, and something I can agree with. Thanks for entering.
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Great words. Loved it. I found it to be very discriptive. I looked a tad deep into that and remebered a time when I sat on the loo and had that exact thinking. I knew I had to change my life. Excellent. You are very good in your writings. They are a good read. All the best.
~Jo~
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WOW, you summed it all up in a few short words. I love it! good luck in the contest dear poet
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Loved it! Gave me a little giggle as I know that feeling! Good write.
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