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The Last Temptation

Tempting,
you are Medusa in love:
provoking heightening ecstasies
never available.

Your philosopher's eyes:
a Grecian's replica:
enchanting my black heart
into my labyrinths
Your pouting lips -
the tempting fruit
drawing me to forlorn seductions
Your charming wits:
drowning me in unthinkable
  labyrinths of courtship

My rainbath of roses
sadly stabbed
Your everlasting coarse affairs:
no love greets my nose;
no restaurant love, or provocative kisses

so I departed:
with spilled coffee,
and your motionless adieu,
icily killing my beating heart.
The twisted affairs:
a superficial trophy of oh-so love

Author notes

Project Lovefest: Unrequited love
Since photographers/filmmakers have mini-series, I thought making my own would be fun. Project Lovefest concentrates on different facets of love, with twists.

I was thinking of submitting as an entry that restricts all pieces to be unpublished, but clearly, it is either too liberal/cliche. Btw, I think I am having writer's block.

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  • slavetothemusic
    March 10, 2007

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    Nice how love is looked at as an intangible, it seemed a little poignant, that there is no room for passion or seduction but as you know, slavetothemusic lives for this


  • sarajevo
    March 9, 2007

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    suddenly i am out of words...
    i love it how you come up with all these original ideas about projects that no one even thought to work on !
    amazing piece my dear...