Your happiness is above my own
Your dreams stand higher then mine
I will cry so you don't have to
I will die so you can survive
Forgive me please for being so blunt
All I mean to do is speak the truth
I love you
Whatever you want from me is yours
If you don't want me around I'm gone
I will hold the world so you can stand
I will light the torch when it's dark
Forgive me please for being so blunt
All I mean to do is speak the truth
I love you
I will never tell you if you hurt me
I would die if I hurt you
I'll keep you warm when it's cold
Here, have my seat if you want one
Please don't leave me!
I need you with me!
I need you near me!
Please hear me!
I love you...
What does that mean to you?
Author notes
please don't use this or any of my other works without my permission. thanks!
poetic movement
A contest entry
- NEO SOUL: POETIC MOVEMENT PT. 2 by cgirl0410.
400 points, ended March 20, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I dunno if the flow worked or not.
Comments
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This clearly states your feelings and devotion to this person. I dont think you can ever be too blunt about love. I rather enjoyed your poem. You stated your feelings quite directly, and everything flowed quite nicely.
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Failed.
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This is a beautiful piece with a great flow. It really really is. I enjoyed reading this. You forgot to put what I asked in the author's notes, please do so. Other than that, you have a great piece here. Thanks for entering. Good luck in the contest. - cgirl0410
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