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A Mistake

A Mistake February 07

Even though I made a mistake
I wish a 2nd chance

The first time I've decieved her
Her heart was broke to pieces

I wanna put it back

Baby jus' listen, Who were you so happy with jus' 6 months ago?

Imagine it again...
Baby read my letters.. Read my poems

They were meant for you

I made a mistake..
But you've made mistakes too

Everyone makes them..

Forgive but don't forget...

I wanna spend my life with you...

Name:  Rayvon Grayson
Email Address:  yourstrulyme@tmail.com
Private Voicemail for comments: 347 417 5616
My Site: http://hipalbum.com/?YOURSTRULYSC

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  • cgirl0410 silver member
    March 8, 2007
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    FIRE!!!!!!!!!!!

    This was just raw passion and truth. And nothing but! I LOVED this piece. It just tells the reader so much about your feelings for this person and the way you feel about the situtation yourself. Great, AMAZING, WRITE!!!!! - cgirl0410