You color my world
with different shades
so many yet to be revealed
I bask in your love
creating hues of ecstasy
finding passion’s rainbow
within each other
Seduce me
in soft shades of Pink
Ravage me
in deepest Purple
Consume me
in fiery Red
Paint my body with your lips
slowly covering every contour
as I become the masterpiece of
your desires
Love me in Shades of Blue
In a list
A contest entry
- Sensuality by Astrotriz.
1200 points, ended June 9, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Shades of Blue by Danna Hobart.
300 points, ended November 13, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thanks for entering.
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Ahh, beautiful! I love the concept of this, it's gorgeous. :]
Thanks for your entry and for following the rules.
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Wow, stirring write
To be the painter of this dream, or reality, would be most exciting indeed. Loved this.
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Great presentation of this poem that speaks to the sensual side. Blue Lagoon comes to midnhere. Mmmmm very nice!
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These are the words of a woman thinking, remembering, re-living passion. She is full of warm feelings and she is warmed by desire
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The poem itself is great...the background and the graphic makes it even better. You have an amazing gift of combining the poem with the ambiance needed to set it off perfectly. Well done yet again
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wow..color me amazingly...Great job and such vivid imagery and put into this sedctive twist>>Brilliant !!! Superb job!! "Paint my body with your lips..." That line alone rocks....
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Colors never tasted so good.
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