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[ As i stand here, ]

As i stand here,
With this fake smile
And in this smudged world,
I stare at you.
But among the faults
I am thinking.
And as I stare at you
You wonder what passes through my head
But you will never know
For I will not tell you.
And if I did,
My mind is too muddled
For you to understand.

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Something I found from the beginning of the school year.

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  • rozethorn
    March 8, 2007

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    short and sweet!

    i know how you feel hun. sometimes it's hard to share your feelings. a lot of the time i don't even want to. nice write!


    • MyHiddenSmile
      March 8, 2007
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      it was actually about a picture for school but i guess you could say thats how i feel sometimes.


  • Poetry of Life
    March 8, 2007
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    I've seen this one before, its good. nice write


    • MyHiddenSmile
      March 8, 2007
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      hmm... you should remember this one. its the one that you read and made me start writing...


  • Jeneralix
    March 7, 2007

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    Wow...this is a great piece. I love the topic and what you put into it. I love it!! Great poem and keep on writing!

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