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THis is the game of life....

My Past haunts me,
So many regrets,
So much Pain,
I fell as if im
Lost in time...

Akways going back,
Always remembring,

What my father did,
What my mother did,
Can't seem to forget
tis horrible Past....

It's to late for
Apoligizes,
They left to many scars...

Family members,
turning their backs,
walked away,
To leave me alone....

Too many loves,
Who's heart break,
When they walk past me,
On the streets...

THis is the game of life...
I gamble and I lose....
I lost..

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  • Perfectly Inperfect
    April 3, 2007

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    I like this wrte and the feelings it puts out but there are a few typos I see, Try and go back and proofread a little more. =)