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What In The?

I'm not really certain how I got this way,
I was driving at night and somehow, now its day.
All I can remember was hitting a bump,
and hitting my head, oh, that's why there's a lump.
Now I'm stuck rather oddly, facing the sky,
wondering brainlessly if I'm going to die.
I can't see the pavement, except out the back,
how on earth did I end up on this rack?
I wish I knew how I could get this back right,
maybe I shouldn't have got drunk last night.

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  • Grey Mouser
    March 10, 2007

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    In amazed, bemused befuddlement, one wakes to see a sight not normally known. Waking up from a drunk can be stuppifying at times under normal circumstances, but just imagine what one would feel waking up behind the wheel here. LOL
    Very good job on the write. Thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,

    Mouser


  • BeyondTheSurface
    March 8, 2007

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    Funny...

    I like, it made me smile mostly cuz I could see this happening to me. Except I don't get drunk.... just "high".... lol.