Squee-ness!
Chocolate bar,
Sitting on my bedroom desk.
Has it been there for a long time?
Don't know, but I think I'll eat it anyways.
It just looks so darn tasty!
Here goes nothing...
Squee-ness!
A contest entry
- RICTAMETERS!!!!!!!! by sunny day.
1750 points, ended March 20, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Creative!
Very creative! I like the flow of this piece... and who DOESN'T like chocolate??!!?? Good luck in the contest!
Debi
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I'm in chocolate heaven right now with this rictameter.
Very humorous entry and the imagery is great. I think I need a chocolate fix now. Just take a quick look at the syllable counts for editing. Plenty of time to edit. Thank you for entering and best wishes in the contest.
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Ok, so I don't understand "squeeness"...perhaps my age...but never the less, I do understand the call of chocolate...even a misshapened Hershey's kiss rescued from the depths of handbag hell. Very cute poem.
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Who can resist a chocolate bar? Mine never sit around long enough to get old. Thank you for entering this contest.
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Yay!! Chocolate is sooo delicious! I love this poem!
Great write and good luck in the contest!
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