The Matrix is a digitalized world where nothing's what it seems
All the things you think are real are really only dreams.
The world that you live in is only an illusion
It's enough to make any person feel full of confusion.
Every person on this earth was born inside a pod
According to the Matrix, there isn't any God.
Computer agents dominate, making us their slaves,
Some people become ready to be unplugged, but others aren't that brave.
The real world was badly damaged when the machines and computers fought,
now to only certain people the truth must be taught.
For there is one man who can save us from the powerful machines' control,
His name is Neo, he is the one, he has an important, predestined role.
First he had to be unplugged, then he had to believe,
Things he thought impossible were things he must achieve.
His crew leader, Morpheus, taught him the rules
That were necesscary for him to face off the computer ghouls.
His girlfriend Trinity helped him too
Their love for each other proved the oracle's words were true.
The agents followed their crew around, ready to silence and kill
All of the unplugged people who knew the Matrix wasn't real.
One member of the crew betrayed them
Several people were killed, all because of him.
To draw out Neo, Morpheus was taken
But Neo and Trinity got him back, and the computer agents were shaken.
Neo and Agent Smith fought to Neo's death
But one kiss from Trinity gave him back his breath.
Neo came back to life and fought the agent better than before
Eventually,they became scared and ran away, but he knew he'd be back for more.
After all, there's two sequels ahead
And Neo's not going to stop until the machines are dead.
Author notes
Written June 28th, 2003
A contest entry
- OPTIONS!!! contest for all! by Phoenix Karkadann.
400 points, ended January 30, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Random Options by Megan Awesome.
470 points, ended November 1, 2007, 23 entries
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I wan't really crazy about the matrix ... but this poem is really good. Your description of the movir was amazing. I love rhyming poems, and this had a great flow. Thank you so much for entering my contest and good luck!!!
Megan -
Hey this was added to my contest and then it wasn't there and I thought it was really good! Aww well, I still really enjoyed reading it even if it couldn't be part of my contest, you did the film (my 2nd favourite of all time
) justice, well done x keep it up, take care x
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Well done! This is quite an excellent piece! The Matrix is an awesome movie! You describe the story really well in poetic form!
Thankyou so much for entering and goodluck.
Melpomene
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Good rhyming and rhythm to this- summarizes the movie quite well- something a lot of people I'm sure could benefit from since the movie itself isn't easy to understand.
There is a philosopher who names himself Drunvalo Melchizedek (www.drunvalo.net/) who speaks of "one reality" yet there are numerous interpretations of reality.
There are some that believe the next pole shift will push us into the next level of existence and it very well could be technology centered (moreso than now).
Just thought you'd like the reference
I think predictions come true in part because people have confidence in the outcomes- a self fulfilling prophecy theory is something I studied- that's what I think of when you mention the Oracle.
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Didn't see the movie but sounds good. Thanks for entering the contest. cake
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Im glad that you took the time to enter my contest good poem, that is a awesome movie. Good luck, LaLa
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Once again a good write but you havent put what choices you chose on any of your poem... could you please do that thanks anyways thanks for entering and good luck
Rowena Jo -
Hi, I love The Matrix! I am 15 years old.
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Eeeexxcceellleenntt!!! Another Matrix poem!! w00t!! w00t!!
I REALLY liked this one! The first movie was awesome! I need to see the second one, now! .::cries::. Me and my mom WERE going to be it wasn't in the theater!! WAAH!! .::sniffs, wiping tears away::. Umm.. .::ahem::. Hahaha. ^__^ I enjoyed reading this poem. It rhymed perfectly and everything about it was explained exactly like the movie. Great job! Thanks for entering this poem and good luck!
Blushing Rose
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