As I look upon the scene
The grass and flowers luscious and green
I wonder what happens after the birds and insects play
When everything else is resting from the day
So at night I creep back to the view
And the glory I witnessed before is renewed
I gaze upon the magical scene
The fairies dancing with thier tambourines
The little nimphs and elves dance by firelight
All to my eyes delight
This wonderful festival begins to wane
At the same time it begin to sprinkle rain
The merry crowd begins bidding ado
As the morning comes and settles the dew
The party is over the grand display
And so begins a fresh day
Again I enjoy the gardens splendor
But that night I will always remember
A contest entry
- For anyone 15 and under (sorry everyone else) Mount Juliet by little-hug.
450 points, ended March 26, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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oops I forgot the applause which this poem definietly deserves !
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Aw wow this is exactly what I imagine happens at night in Mount Juliet. I've never been there at night but I'm sure the fairies come out to play then under the star light. I think the rhyme and flow is very good even if it is not obvious from the structure but I enjoyed reading it out loud! thank you so much for entering and good luck !
ellie
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Cute!
Although I did enjoy your poem, the ryiming was just a bit sketchy and forced. Besides that it flows nicely and puts a pleasent image into your mind!
much luv~
shadowed
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