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A Secret (Syndolet)

a secret
on sealed lips
kept silent
always goes
-unspoken-









Author notes

The Syndolet has 5 lines with 3 syllables in each line.

The FIRST and LAST lines are SYNONYMS

Can be on any subject

L1. 3 syllables MAIN TOPIC
L2. 3 syllables
L3. 3 syllables
L4. 3 syllables
L5. 3 syllables SYNONYM FOR L1

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  • Thomas beechey
    March 31, 2007

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    That is a very interesting style of poetry and one that I've ever attempted...I'm always intrigued by vivid descriptions being displayed by very few words and this defintely fits that category --- I'll make a note to definitely cehck back here later

    P.S. Thank you for your comment

    Tom


  • Luna Tique Fringe gold member
    March 31, 2007

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    I like this
    new form called
    cindalette
    I tried it
    I loved it

    Wow, this was genius. I know my attempt was a little(lot) flip..but,I can see the possibilities.
  • deleteit
    March 16, 2007

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    Unspoken secrets-a treasure kept, sometimes a burden. Strength either way...in yourself and maybe in a trust someone has placed in you. Awesome


  • Huntress silver member
    March 7, 2007

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    a promise is something that should remain unspoken Very cool