I dream
All through the night
Dream of my gorgeous wife
We sing, we dance, we hug, we kiss
Truly my dream life is replete with bliss
Awakened by a kiss and smile
Part for too long a while
All through the day
I dream.
In a list
A contest entry
- RICTAMETERS!!!!!!!! by sunny day.
1750 points, ended March 20, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite " SPECIAL" by wingsofgold25.
450 points, ended May 17, 2007, 123 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You did a real good job Thanks for entering my contest
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This is a wonderful rictameter that you penned for the contest. I feel the love you share with your wife through the imagery your lovely words produced. You are both blessed. Thank you for entering and best wishes in the contest. Love and God bless, Joyce
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How could one help but smile...lucky woman, your wife.
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How lucky you and your wife are to have found a love like this. I couldn't help but smile at the happiness you share. Thank you for entering this contest.
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