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September mourns on silver lake

The sun sits in silence
a grieving watchman upon our sorrow
as the hues set to sepia tones
around the bridges of our silver lake
untouched by time, the moment remains
in my memory forever, and forever-more
sadly felt in swirls of surreality.

The waters feeding the lake giggle
like those noises we made
in our youth, together hiding in the long grass.
Playful moments that we never thought would end.
Immortal, strong, and loving we would ever be.
Just shadows of who we were
now gone like the morning mist
rising off the these chilled waters.
As if they laugh at; and whisper
of the foolishness of our youth.
Uncapture-able as the gossamer kisses
of light that danced in your hair.
Gone like the scent of lavender
upon the summer breezes.
Yet frozen still, like the waters
in days to come.

The geese, and ducks fill the ponds center
as they did , oh so long ago
that was just but a moment.
Quacking and honking in their
avian tongues; I wonder if they are the children's,
children of the children who's parents
watched us when we were but children
dreaming of parenthood together.
Coupled in the embrace of adults
as they crooned us voyeuristic
from their aquatic chairs.
Applauding us in the thrum of their flapping wings
upon the water, in those last days of summer.
Before the seasons fully changed
and they would leave on their journey
to warmer climes, and fertile grounds.

I stand here by the bridge
where I waved that last goodbye
and silently mouthed your name, before disappearing
into the mists as if swallowed by time,
the last tear upon your cheek forever etched
within my heart, breaking it still
in the what if's of tomorrows sorrow.
As the mists arise and almost beckon me
within to cross, as if time would reverse
and we could make that right,
instead of being left ... alone.

It is quiet now,
upon the timbers
as I silently
wish to cross that bridge again
Hoping upon hope
that you will
welcome me
Home.

B.L. House 2007

*** Inspired by October Road and the poetry of August Sky/2007 ***

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  • Desire gold member
    March 7, 2007

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    Oy-

    Wow-
    Ditto what Your other half said...
    and this is one piece that evokes much emotion
    for the eyes just swell with liquid...
    Powerful images~

    Thank You for sharing this with us~
    Much Happiness Your way my Friend

    Best wishes to You
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    March 7, 2007

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    Most wonderfully and beautifully penned as only you could do,hon!
    Beautiful sharing! Your pen spills the most talented ink...


  • DiamondOfAngels
    March 7, 2007

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    This is a very nice and beautiful poem. I love how you made it seem as if the reader is there, watching, seeing what you're seeing. Excellent!
    ~AmY~


  • Auburn Sunrise silver member
    March 7, 2007

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    beautiful

    hauntingly beautiful write. I love the imagery and the connection from the bridge to love... the waters to life... it's perfect. Excellent metaphors and such a nice touch of hope at the end. It seemed so sad and final until the end... nice endng.
    Keep up the great work. I like how you capitalized "Home".
    I'll have to check "October Road" out...

  • BHolzner gold member
    March 7, 2007
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    Moments in life are like slices of quiet dreams.
    Well penned. BHOlzner

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