new love
blossoming fresh
as the crisp morning air
like perennial gardens bathed
in the long awaited coming of spring
petals of promise awaken
readily embraced in
the arms of a
new love
A contest entry
- RICTAMETERS!!!!!!!! by sunny day.
1750 points, ended March 20, 2007, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I really do think this is superb...I popped in to see it once before, and had no little strange little horned smiling things to give...
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Your so sweet. Your comments are better than strange horny things any day. Wait... Let me rethink that.
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What a fantastic piece, you have described the beginnings of a loving relationship perfectly here. So serene and wonderfully written. Loved this!
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This is a wonderful rictameter you have penned for the contest. It is filled with beautiful imagery of love that touches all the senses. Thank you for entering and best wishes in the contest.
Joyce
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I love form poetry and you have done the rictameter justice! The words flow so nicely off my tongue. My fav line would be line three, because when I first step outside there is nothing like that first shock of fresh air to arouse your senses and fill your lungs like I hadn't been really breathing all night. And that is how new love should feel, like wow I can finally breathe again! Good luck in the contest!
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I like it^^
It has a sense of hope.
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brilliant
this is superb sheltered, i don't know how you manage it, it doesn't seem forced at all, great stuff.very well done matey, best of luck in the contest,
floorboards.
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A garden of love...very nice.
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I believe that new love is the most intoxicating feeling on earth. You have captured the feeling of hope and promise. Thank you for entering this contest.
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Hic!...
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I know, I'm right olliver on it, right now
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